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A hope for the forgotten ones by =firedarkdragon:iconfiredarkdragon:

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Something i started some time ago and finished today at art class. This is a really old character of mine i dont use for a long time now. I thought he would be appropiate for a situation like this =P

Please, tell me if it looks good or not, especially the background.. I had my doubts there

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*DragonHeartLuver Jul 4, 2009, 3:14:21 PM
omg i love this piece of work it screams a kind heart for the young ones on the streets now a days the little ones look so darn cute and your Character seems very protective over them

the Back ground is Great i think the broken down Buildings around them was a awesome touch and the fact that there's snow on the ground is a good effect too u love this picture ^^ i wish i could draw as well as you your amazing ^^

keep up your awesome work i will be sure comment every one of your work

your friend
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~darkstar07 Jul 4, 2009, 2:42:38 PM
Aww, it looks real good! Love it. :D

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~DJWill Jul 4, 2009, 2:44:59 PM
Esta muy lindo

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=Mr-Hazard Jul 4, 2009, 2:51:29 PM
Looks great! ^w^ I would post a critique but I'm really lazy, so I'll just point out what i see here... ^^;

First and foremost is the main subject's left wing... it looks out of place folded like it is... And the one other thing is the background... you might try making the sky a lighter tone to give more depth to the snow effect... and also make the wreckage look a bit more 'dirty.' Other than that, fantastic work. ^w^

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=firedarkdragon Jul 4, 2009, 2:59:08 PM
Thanks very much 8D
As for that wing.. its supposed to look a bit bad because its broken or hurt, reason why some feathers are missing.
As for the rest, i will keep that in mind :D

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=firedarkdragon Jul 4, 2009, 2:59:37 PM
Gracias :D

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=firedarkdragon Jul 4, 2009, 2:59:44 PM
Thank you ^^

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=Mr-Hazard Jul 4, 2009, 3:01:32 PM
Ahh ok, I see now. :meow:

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~DJWill Jul 4, 2009, 3:02:59 PM
De nada ^^ =) es una alegria verte ^^

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~aohoshi2008 Jul 4, 2009, 3:12:10 PM
Theres always hope for the forgotten ones.

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