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Freedom... by =firedarkdragon:iconfiredarkdragon:

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...You can not have it.



Finally, decided to upload this that ive finished about a month ago D: I think its the first time i draw a cave from that angle.. Like.. looking at the "door" from inside. I hope i didnt fail too much XD; Im listening to your comments and critiques please.

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!BlackSolstice Sep 29, 2009, 1:42:59 PM
I really like the concept of this...the hungry look in the beast's eyes, the contrast between the dark neutrals and the bright happy colours.

One thing I may have to critique...the bars in front of the door don't look quite right. The fifth bar from the left looks a bit too far forward...I couldn't quite place it, but they just don't look completely correct. That same fifth bar also looks a little too dark, as do the rest of the bars following it...or maybe the first four bars are just too light. Again, though, I do like the perspective, and the torn wings look really cool. Keep it up FDD; you've really been improving. C:
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=Kimiko-The-Umbreon Sep 29, 2009, 9:42:14 AM
oh wow 8D
this has a sorta of dark imprisoned feel to it and it makes you feel bad for the dog/dragon ... thingy ^^;

one thing i think is a bit of a stand out; the happy place in the background looks a little bit rushed; even tho its ment to be all bright and happy you may want to stick in some dark areas to make it look like its in the picture more.
everything else is awesome; your coloring is spot on i cant see any faults or mistakes in that. your lineart makes everything look soft and hug-able C:
so yeh awesome work; keep it up ~*
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*DragonHeartLuver Sep 29, 2009, 9:28:45 AM
wow you did this VERY WELL ^^ i love how you did this one the way the cave looks is awesome ^^

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!Mr-Hazard Sep 29, 2009, 9:33:03 AM
Well, that really sucks... D8

I love the contrast between the two sides, you executed it pretty well :meow:
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Mood: Joy *ShadowKyogre Sep 29, 2009, 9:34:40 AM
My only beef is that I can see the branches clearly on all of the trees. *shrug* Makes the trees look like giant lettuce leaves.

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*40rn Sep 29, 2009, 9:34:46 AM
that looks great nice work..
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*ShadowCharizard36 Sep 29, 2009, 9:36:59 AM
Only thing I can see is not right is pretty much the tree branches other than that it looks damn good
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~paladin095 Sep 29, 2009, 9:45:12 AM
Oww pobrecito bicho X3, pero bueno parece que algunos estamos privados de tal privilegio

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~HronawmonsTamer Sep 29, 2009, 10:28:34 AM
Awwwww,that's sad...Poor thing...

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~DragonHeart-Orange Sep 29, 2009, 10:30:03 AM
You captured the message well within the drawing. A beautiful landscape outside, yet, bars, chains, and having part of your flesh fused with the wall shows that such a thing is impossible. An impossible dream, the ultimate torture.

Looked it over a few times, and there really isn't anything I can comment on for you to change. It really seems perfect.

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~deathsonic Sep 29, 2009, 10:59:09 AM
I think you did good. the pose of the creature looking outside seems about right considering how it looks and the outside being "oddly" as i'll say happy gives off tons of want to be free and not cooped up in the cave.

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~Genbe89 Sep 29, 2009, 10:59:10 AM
really nice, I love the work you do with color and lighting.

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